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At the beginning of the third paragraph in the "Why get a PhD?" section, starting with: | At the beginning of the third paragraph in the "Why get a PhD?" section, starting with: | ||
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Revision as of 15:23, 7 December 2009
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Section - Why get a PhD
Paragraph - 3
At the beginning of the third paragraph in the "Why get a PhD?" section, starting with: "There are many great things to working as a university professor..."
I believe it would be more understandable beginning with this:
"The work of a university professor has many interesting and unique characteristics. There are three that we will discuss here that are great blessings and keys to being a successful professor."
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Section - Why get a PhD
Paragraph - 3
"If you enjoy and are excited about learning about the world around you, asking questions and findings answers, and sharing what you learn with others than you will likely enjoy earning a Ph.D."
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"If you enjoy learning about the world around you, and are excited about asking questions, finding answers, and sharing what you learn with others then you will likely enjoy earning a Ph.D."
